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Cracking like marble,
I'm breaking like stone,
Losing control of all that I've known.


Who do I love?
Who can I trust?
I'm on the verge of breaking,
I'm starting to bust.


Your cold gaze cuts through me like ice,
and your solum words are rarely nice,
but some how like moths to a flame,
I keep finding myself calling out your name.

Theres a wall I built around my heart,
But somehow you always manage to tare it apart.

Do I love or hate you I cannot say,
Leaving and going, just walking away,
is something I cannot bring myself to do,
For I am cracking just for you.
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Crackingby bryzer66

Literature / Poetry / Romantic / Teen / Free Verse©2012-2014 bryzer66
This is a love poem written about, honestly no one. Just a bit of randomness a wrote down the otherday and thought it came out nice. I hope you enjoy it.
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Ichigoisawsome Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
[link]

Here you go
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kitkat6251 Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*i have nothing to say to that other than "beautiful, truly beautiful"
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bryzer66 Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you
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Alexa91198 Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
truly amazing!
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Ichigoisawsome Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I think it's lovely. Would you like me to draw a picture for it? ^^
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bryzer66 Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yes please
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Ichigoisawsome Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ill post it then send you a link when I'm done. I should have by Sunday. I've been busy
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